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Poetry alights on my heart like dew.
I wake up on a cloud
and the silver lining is my sun
shooting insight into my star-crossed eyes.
I swallow it with a dose of daydreams:
take as often as needed,
which is often as much as the Milky Way wants,
The cosmic doctor comes to visit
laughs at my insecurities
and cries at my confidence
and spins me around on my axis
until my cloud settles on my skin
where I'm fallen and nestled in bleary morning wildflowers
And the supergiant gone critical
and the moisture sapped from oceans of hope
photosynthesizes
in my verdant blanket.
I burrow deeper
into waking aether
pluck a quill from a dazzle-bird drifting by,
and sticking a spile into the skyflowers,
I pour my lifeblood ink
onto papyrus laced with whimsy.
I wake up on a cloud
and the silver lining is my sun
shooting insight into my star-crossed eyes.
I swallow it with a dose of daydreams:
take as often as needed,
which is often as much as the Milky Way wants,
The cosmic doctor comes to visit
laughs at my insecurities
and cries at my confidence
and spins me around on my axis
until my cloud settles on my skin
where I'm fallen and nestled in bleary morning wildflowers
And the supergiant gone critical
and the moisture sapped from oceans of hope
photosynthesizes
in my verdant blanket.
I burrow deeper
into waking aether
pluck a quill from a dazzle-bird drifting by,
and sticking a spile into the skyflowers,
I pour my lifeblood ink
onto papyrus laced with whimsy.
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wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i wrote this about 20 minutes after i wrote "mirage."
took about 10 minutes on my iphone notepad; inspired by feeling poetical on a not-quite-fall morning.
unlike most of my poetry, i keep editing tiny words here and there. i'm still caught up on the last word...
i wrote this about 20 minutes after i wrote "mirage."
took about 10 minutes on my iphone notepad; inspired by feeling poetical on a not-quite-fall morning.
unlike most of my poetry, i keep editing tiny words here and there. i'm still caught up on the last word...
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This poems combines amazing imagery with cosmic sincerity. I really adored your subtle rhymes, too. They added a lot of charm to the poem.
Just wonderful, star.
Just wonderful, star.